Attitude Talk
Today We were Visited by Attitude talk company. The person that Visited Us was Toni. He Was talking About ... Our Future.
Their Were 4 animals Lion, Otter,Golden retriever And beaver.
(Lion) Represents ... Bossy-The Leader.
(Otter) Represents ... Funny/ But Gets bored fast.
(Golden Retriever) Loyal Careful- Can't Say No.
(Beaver) Hard worker- Doesn't Have fun Much.
We Hope he Comes Back Soon.
2 comments:
Hi Troy,
My name is Aaliyah, I am a year 6 student currently attending St Pius X.
I really like how you explained in your writing who Toni was and why he was there to talk with you.
I think it would be a lot better if you explained why you posted this event and tell us which animal you think you are. Other than that, I think your writing was fantastic!
Good Job!
Aaliyah
Year 7 **
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